Climate Emergency!
It’s been the hottest ever year;
The one point five is broken.
But in society round here,
These words are never spoken.
There’s still time for a reset,
Through measures tough or token;
The greenhouse levels climb, and yet,
These words are never spoken.
The glaciers may melt away,
And fires taunt the ocean,
But in the workplace or at play,
These words are never spoken.
Though chances are we won’t outlive
The worst of this commotion,
There’s one thing youth will not forgive:
These words were never spoken.
Rolph David
Tue 14th Jan 2025 19:32
Stephen,
What another great poem from your quill!
It really captures the stark reality of the climate emergency. The repetition of "these words are never spoken" highlights the denial and silence that surround such an urgent issue. The way you've illustrated the gradual but unstoppable changes—like the glaciers melting and the rising temperatures—is powerful, and the poem paints a haunting picture of how little action is being taken.
One suggestion I’d like to offer is to tweak the line "The glaciers may melt away" to "The glaciers will melt away." The certainty of "will" feels stronger and more aligned with the unavoidable consequences we face if action isn’t taken soon. It could add a sense of urgency that matches the tone of the poem.
Overall, it's a thought-provoking piece that serves as a much-needed reminder of what’s at stake. Great work!