Lone Petal
The petal of a rose once fell
then drifted slowly through the trees.
Upon the wind it tumbled long
until it drifted up to me.
At first, I saw no value there
in just one petal all alone.
But then I stooped and picked it up
and found that it was still a rose.
I felt its velvet touch my skin,
as its aroma filled the air.
I breathed to take the fragrance in,
and suddenly I was aware
of every moment it had lived.
I felt the roots from which it came.
I seemed to speak without a word -
that all of nature is the same.
How blind we are within this shell,
we ride along so ignorantly.
We waste our time with buy and sell
and miss what otherwise would be.
It’s hard, I know, to just let go
and not be drowned with day-to-day.
But take an invite from the rose…
and smell the flowers along the way.
Rolph David
Wed 12th Mar 2025 17:15
Hello Jeff,
This poem is simply stunning in its depth and elegance. The way you use the image of a single petal falling, drifting, and being discovered reflects the delicate process of understanding love — unsure at first, but growing into something profound once we truly stop and pay attention. Your words remind me of how easy it is to overlook the small, beautiful moments in life, only to realise their significance when we take the time to really see them. The metaphor of the rose, with its hidden roots and the awareness it awakens, speaks to how we can so often miss the deeper connections around us. You've captured something timeless here — an invitation to pause, reflect, and cherish the small things. I love it!
Regards,
Rolph