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The Great Unread

I fear being well-read

becoming lost in a deep

morass of others’ cleverly

sculptured words,

 

a Venus flytrap poet

stuck and slowly strangled,

sucked dry by the influence

of those who’ve gone before

all originality desiccated,

 

I want my words to drip like

blood, soaking the reader in

life-giving warm embraces

not spilling with a caustic

rattle like breakfast cereal

on a bone china dish,

 

influence can be viral, it

can taint, lure and divert

a poet’s purpose, a maze

of misdirection, a slough

of desperation, a quagmire

of the ordinary, I must

stay true to my words

© Graham R Sherwood 3/25

 

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Mar 2025 09:11

I like the idea of starting from a blank canvas, Graham. But I suppose influences are always there, buzzing around the edges. A sort of unseen irritant. like so-called experience. But can we do without them?

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 22nd Mar 2025 15:07

A superb poem, Graham. Loved the second stanza!

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David RL Moore

Sat 22nd Mar 2025 13:48

That is so very true Graham.

To find your own voice and to maintain it without the obvious taint of the influence of others it extremely difficult.

I suppose remembering there is nothing new under the Sun might help in excusing our own musings likeness. It is of course ironic to use the influence of Shakespeare in an attempt to dismiss any such flaw.

David RL Moore

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