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Antwerpen, 1995

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At Antwerp's port, where ships dissolve

into the horizon's mist, cultures blend

like brushstrokes on a canvas. I stand 
at the water's edge, feeling the heartbeat

of a city alive with ceaseless motion.

 

The cathedral's spire pierces the sky,

a beacon of faith, tenacity, and aspiration.

Its shadow reaches into my thoughts,

reminding me that dreams endure

like stone against time, building a bridge

between hope and reality.

 

In the bustle of diamonds and docks,

I see the shimmering facets of human effort—

each face a tale, each smile a mystery.

 

This city's pulse quickens my own,

a symphony of striving and stories

shaping its identity—and mine.

 

I recall visiting my cousin here,

an artist drawn to Antwerp's vibrant embrace.

We wandered through cobblestone streets,

sharing stories over Belgian brews and fritjes.

His eyes gleamed with the city's energy,

as if his brush could capture its eclectic charm,

every salient facet a revelatory expedition.

 

And then, a man by the docks catches my eye,

his face hauntingly familiar, though years older—

it’s my cousin, or someone who could have been.

But my cousin moved to Paris long ago.

I wave hesitantly; he doesn’t respond.

Was it truly him, or just another tale

woven into Antwerp’s enigmatic rhythm?

 

The city's heartbeat grows louder,

its stories murmur unanswered questions—

and I walk away, my mind restless,

wondering how much of the city I truly know,

and how much of myself remains a mystery.

 

 

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 30th Mar 2025 12:00

Thanks @ Tom Merton🌷🙏🏻🕊️only too glad to have a home for my work. You are greatly appreciated 🌷🕊️🙏🏻

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 30th Mar 2025 11:58

Hey Rolph, it’s awesome to visit European cities, each has its own story and unique charm (quirks even). The line found its inspiration from ‘the winds that whistle through the ancient columns of the Parthenon,’ 🏛️ (my paraphrase from the film: “My Life in Ruins”). Thanks so much 🙏🏻🕊️🌷

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 30th Mar 2025 11:53

You’re not wrong there @Stephen Gospage; that’s why the visits rather than residence which I did for a period of time in a quieter university city (Leuven) a couple of cousins and their families live in Antwerp by choice. Thank you kindly 🙏🏻🕊️🌷

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TOM MERTON

Sun 30th Mar 2025 11:18

How could I not agree with the previous comments Red

one HECK of a great read-thank you!


Best of my regards

Tom

Rolph David

Sun 30th Mar 2025 10:32

Wow, wow, wow, Red B. Keshner. I especially envy you for the following lines – I wish I had thought of them myself:
"...thoughts,
reminding me that dreams endure
like stone against time..."
I don’t know Antwerp yet, but after reading your wonderful poem, I’m adding it to my bucket list today. Thank you for that.

Cheers,
Rolph

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 30th Mar 2025 09:21

You have captured something of this great city, RBK. I have been there a lot recently. An enchanting place, in a lively, urban sort of way.

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