q u e t c h

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Tendril wafted dunes
of barren sands waffle,
swirl across mile
upon mile in every direction-
your face appears a horizon away,
there is little comfort found
in accompanying echoes.

Drifting sticks
wail in the pitched wind,
stretched on distant recollection-
stylus of the scribe named Regret;
each flurrying breeze
turns a new page,
taking with it freshly shed tears.

Foetid droppings
of some wastrel desert vagabond
provide a vivid reminder
of how it can never be again,
to kick it away
would only contaminate
these well-worn wandering shoes.

Head facing forward
wherever the nose points
except in the back of the mind
where the oasis burbles-
each leafy frond conceals
intimate moments now buried
within the unmindful desert's gut.

 

 

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 14th Apr 2025 09:11

Thanks kindly dear Rolph🕊️🙏🏻🌷and sand particles do find themselves in the oddest places even after a thorough clean or two 🕊️🙏🏻🌷

Rolph David

Mon 14th Apr 2025 08:00

Good morning Red,
The imagery in "q u e t c h" is striking, evoking a barren, unforgiving landscape that seems to mirror emotional isolation and regret. For me, the desert becomes a symbol for lost moments and buried memories, each breeze turning over pages of the past, carrying with it the weight of things that can never be undone. The oasis, hidden in the mind, offers both hope and sorrow—a place of refuge that remains out of reach. It’s a poignant exploration of the struggle to move forward while being haunted by what’s left behind.
Regards,
Rolph

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