The top line
When people are selling
Political schemes,
The top line will tell you
The truth of their dreams:
If someone's first sentence
Is “most folk are fools,”
They're fixing to force them
To follow their rules;
If “riches from rags”
Is the first thing they say,
Their policy's planned
To make poverty stay;
And when “right of trade”
Is the first right you're told,
They're seeking a system
Where slaves can be sold.
Rolph David
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:50
Marnanel,
"The Top Line" is striking in its sharp, incisive commentary. The way you distill complex political motives into clear, vivid lines is powerful. Each opening sentence you highlight cuts to the heart of the manipulation behind those words, and it’s an impactful reminder to question the rhetoric we hear. Its structure enhances its message—each stanza is a punch, and the last line hits especially hard. You've captured a kind of cynical clarity that’s both unsettling and thought-provoking. The poem is a perfect critique of how political language can shape our perceptions and the systems we live in.
Regards,
Rolph