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A lovely warm spring day

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A lovely warm spring day, no coat needed.

The weather can be friendly, usually is

But through Burma a cyclone has seeded

Destruction, loss of life and hopelessness.

The Burmese authorities are far less

Accepting of our help than they should be,

But this time they have been forced to request

Our charity, humiliatingly.

Some good may come of such a tragedy;

In wartime, most of the public heeded

The call for unity; foreign allies

Joining the struggle against the Nazi.

As once our threatened people united,

Could weather’s violence bring us back to peace?

◄ Manchester Yesterdays

Ain't life a bitch? ►

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clarissa mckone

Wed 7th May 2008 03:47

HI Antonio, Nice poem, I read about it in the news, so sad, that so many are always hurt every year by these weather events. Makes me wonder why they dont move inland?

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Wed 7th May 2008 00:22

HI, Antonio

Excellent write, on time too… You have brought to my attention - "Could weather’s violence bring us back to peace?" - I wish the weather changed the World before the Catastrophe will hit the Earth. The axle of the Earth is already changing and in 2012, there will be major one when the sun will enter the Milky Way. That was supposed to bring many dangerous eruptions, like Volcano's and Earthquakes.

RALLY GOOD WRITE-BRAVO!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (4744)

Tue 6th May 2008 22:20

A comment on a recent event. Brave write.

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