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Sweet Nothings...

 

I feel big like pink candy floss, 
sweetly spun on a stick.
But then I remember.
how too much makes you sick.

So you can't make a meal
of the whole darned thing,
but you nibble a little,
lips glowing so pink agin

Then it's back in the bag
where the stickiness shows,
and spilt candy floss always 
clings onto your clothes....

And I think how I would
like to cling on there too,
you wouldnt wash me
off them would you?

I'd breathe in your scent
as I held you endlessly near
and whisper of polos
into your blushing ear

For polos are really
sweet nothings you know
and watching you smile 
makes my heart all aglow...

©Rhumour
August 9th 2010


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winston plowes

Thu 12th Aug 2010 22:43

Liked this one Dave, Well done :-)

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 16:41

Hi Dave - I just posted my fairground poem but somehow the wall of death didn't make it! I think I got a bit carried away! xx

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Wed 11th Aug 2010 15:06

Hehe - yes indeed- great spectator sport - good luck with the pen - great wall of words... :)

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 14:28

Hi Dave - have you ever seen the Wall of Death? It is so amazing! And the NOISE!! All those little old Indian motorbikes rattling around, whizzing right up to the top and nearly knocking yer 'ead off! Great! Has given me an idea for a poem atcherly.xxxx

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Mon 9th Aug 2010 17:12

'I feel big like pink candy floss'.....oh really! have you ever been a trick cyclist big Dave? ..lol! no,seriously Dave,the sentiment in this takes me back to my diesel smelling fairground,teddy boy days somehow-very evocative of that era for me-thanks-Stef. erm, pink candy floss....do I have to leave a kiss or twelve on here in future? lol! good one matey.

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