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THE CHAT OF TWO WOMEN

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Two classmates were chatting.

Accidentally they've met in the street,indeed,

they were not so old and not so young,

much more than forty.

The first one said:"I feel so young

and want to be sometimes so naughty,

I want to love again and certainly be loved,.

I want the romances to sing,

I want to fly so high in a swing,

I want to dance under the rain,

in Spain, on the plain..............,

to hear sweet words of love again,

to die of passion."

Another one said with a compassion:

"What are you talking about?

I can live happily without

all those crazy wishes of yours,

cause I don't like anyone

to shatter my peace and quiet,

I think how soon I'll be retired.

Put those foolish wishes out of your head.

We are getting old,

all we had had already past.

I remember you've always been an enthusiast.

Two women were chatting,

The first one just forgetting her age,

the other one was old enough

and her life was really tough.

Two women were chatting,

Two different destinies and souls.

The first one was full of life,

the second one was getting empty.



Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

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Bernadette Herbertson

Wed 18th Aug 2010 01:40

realy like this poem and there is such a truthfulness in these words ..xx bernadette

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Sun 15th Aug 2010 09:37

Good morning beautiful early bird-I put a comment on this lovely poem yesterday-mmm? it was to say,I really love the flow of this poem-you must have worked hard on it-and thank you!-Stef-xx(G-xx)

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