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I WOULD COME BACK

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I would come back

 

but the roads are hidden.

 

Though many times were ridden

 

they haven't left any tracks.

 

 

 

I would come as a spring dawn

 

breaking the winter's yearning,

 

greeting the beauty of the morning,

 

the first flowers on the lawn.

 

 

 

I would come as a tender rain,

 

as an April thaw in springs.

 

I would grow big wings

 

but the idea is inane and brings pain.

 

 

 

I would come as a lilac sunset,

 

as silver or amber early dew.

 

I would become a real mew,

 

 

fly to you and sing a duet.

 

 

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

Love lost

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 21st Aug 2010 07:19

Thank you so much my dears.

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jean lucy thompson

Fri 20th Aug 2010 22:07

Nice one Larisa :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 20th Aug 2010 20:27

Ditto Lynns comments Odessa girl! hope you are well dear-thank you-Stefan-xx(McCoy-xx)

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Lynn Dye

Fri 20th Aug 2010 20:18

Lovely poem, Larisa, enjoyed it! The picture is lovely too. Love, Lynn xx

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