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An Indulgence

I sit here
like a ferocious poet - all feeling, and love, and flint,
and force,
and guilt,
swallowing acrid waters to dampen the quilt
I wrapped around love, like romance,
and tilt
my chest just to feel again the statue of you inside.
 
And that you,
the one that I made,
yes, that you, still smacks
my waste;
that me, yes me,
that I made wrongly over so vast an ace,
plumping my bottom lip,
falling foul of a spelling bee,
thinking too much out loud
and reasoning too often with rum.
 
Mud is water that has travelled far
but has not run
and I,
I am a hippo,
cracking a kiss in the sun.
My breath bubbles, so precisely present:
"what have you become?"

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Donna Marie Beck

Sun 5th Sep 2010 17:07

This is great, love the last part.
Dogstails.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 20:56

You know how I feel about your work. Once again I can feel its quality but I don't speak the language. Particularly like the first verse.

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Sat 21st Aug 2010 13:52

This is Just breathtakingly superb. I'm not at all surprised that Cynthia is spurred on intellectually... Wonderful, wonderful imagery...

Well done a superb poem !


Augusta xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 21st Aug 2010 12:21

Your poetry is a spur to me, always prodding my intellectual capacities to broader horizons.

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