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Stagger Out

A half person/half reptile running through my skin

splits open a cartoon without the delicate line

and vulgar lips smack Pandora’s grin; red pus and a constant now,

charting ridiculous, a tailgate for a tongue,

slipping and red wine and bottles all gone.

Doodling eyes and questionable therapies

are fastening their seatbelts

on packets of cigarettes - each drag a soliloquy

and each sip at the side, a wisdom of grit -fast forward

a few more and your diary blooms,

and petal by petal

you are as solid as a breeze.

You are public property -

as retractable as a sneeze.

◄ An Indulgence

Electric Chair ►

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 2nd Sep 2010 21:56

Another in your impeccablly high standard Marianne.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 2nd Sep 2010 16:01

I like this Marianne, some brill lines, each drag a soliloquay and the last four lines esp. Esp esp the last line! Sorry to sound like I'm chopping up your poem, I do like all of it!

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