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Don't Tell Me

Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
You'll lie.
Don't hurt me. (repeat twice)
Let love live.
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
I'll die.

Please touch me.
Let love breathe.
Please love me.
Don't fade away.

I need you now.
The world has fallen down.

All these broken streets
lie before me.
All these empty eyes
don't hold me in.

Your arms are safe.
Your kiss is my air.
Your touch is my reality.
Don't tell me
you're going away.

Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
You'll lie.
Don't hurt me. (repeat twice)
Let love live.
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
I'll die.

I need you now.
The world has fallen away.

You said forever.
You promised to hold my hand
You said never.
I thought you stay with me.

Take me back.
Keep me here.
Let love breathe.
Don't take my heart away.

Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
You'll lie.
Don't hurt me. (repeat twice)
Let love live.
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
I'll die.

Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
You'll lie.
Don't hurt me. (repeat twice)
Let love live.
Don't tell me. (repeat twice)
I'll die.


Don't Tell Me
By, Melissa R. Mendelson
(Thought I post my new song here for feedback) :)

◄ Life to Dream, Life to Survive

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4744)

Tue 27th May 2008 12:48

I'd love to hear the music that flows with your song. Grab a mic and get it recorded!

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 26th May 2008 22:56

Let love live and breathe, forever and a day.
'Always.'

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 26th May 2008 21:55

Hi Melissa, this is beautiful, having been through my fair share I can truly identify with your sentiments.

Thanks for sharing it and your lovely comments about my work, very much appreciated, hope to have something else out soon, Jeff

<Deleted User> (4281)

Mon 26th May 2008 20:23

Dear Melissa

Beautiful song - There is no need for hurting another. Love, compassion, and respect I can see as the key link in any relationship. If recorded it will be an excellent song!

You are very romantic and it is shows in your written word.
FABULOUS JOB!!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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