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To Touch The Sky

My hands always
wanted to touch
the sky.

Wings of my dreams
still dance in my heart
and beg to fly.

Time is nothing but sand
spilled across this wooden floor,
and I am afraid to die.

If I go tomorrow,
what have I done today
to show that I did try
to paint my dreams
so vividly
across the sky?
How will you know
of words unsaid,
my heart's cry
to live,
to dream,
and never to die?
My hands still reach
up above me
to touch the sky.


To Touch The Sky
by, Melissa R.
Mendelson

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Alison Mary Dunn

Tue 3rd Jun 2008 13:40

Melissa, as ever your words are beautiful. Time's 'grains of sand' on the wooden floor and 'wings of dreams'. It's all there, a powerful reflection of how we feel when we reach for our true potential. Keep pushing the boundaries, for I've no doubt you will take us with you when you do.
Ally x

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 2nd Jun 2008 23:15

Hi Melissa, this is quite beautiful and more experienced writers than me have already told you that, I feel quite tranquil after reading it, thanks Jeff

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Mon 2nd Jun 2008 22:10

I echo Zuzanna's write...what a wonderful poem.

Mel
x

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clarissa mckone

Mon 2nd Jun 2008 13:39

Hi Melissa, I very much enjoyed eading this wonderful poem of yours! Its very nice. Thanks

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Mon 2nd Jun 2008 07:30

Dear Melissa

This is beautiful poem… I loved the self examine lines with a touch of a doubt if you accomplished all ...Sadness in this stanza...

""If I go tomorrow,
what have I done today
to show that I did try
to paint my dreams
so vividly
across the sky? ""

Then you getting again on your feet and carry on with your strong desire to live fulfilling your dreams...LOVELY!!

Wonderful poem !
Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Mon 2nd Jun 2008 03:20

Wings of my dreams still dance in my heart and beg to fly.
I love this, and "never to die."
It touched my heart and gave me butterflies.
Like a child in a summer meadow with flowers in her hair, surrounded by serenity, peace and love.
I can smell the bluebells and sweetpeas with their delicate pastel colours.
Even if it wasn't what you intended, this is the image i received. I wouldn't have missed this for the world. Thankyou. love janet.x

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