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mermaid wedding

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the cave is dark and deep and wet

where all the mermaids hide

they keen and cry and pine to try

and catch a sailor lad

 

they swim in circles

at great speed

and he is sucked right down

a willing victim to their greed

oh what a way to drown

 

a mermaid wedding is the thing

a glorious sight to see

the sailor's final word is yes

as she says "marry me!"

 

to love a mermaid he must give

his heart his mind his home

but it is worth it for the love

that only he will know

 

i know I’m not a mermaid

but i've learned a thing or three

from sitting on my ragged rock

beside the stormy sea

 

that loves a thing that conquers all

ignore it if you dare

and when into the sea you fall

a mermaids waiting there!

 

 

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Lynn Dye

Sun 29th Aug 2010 10:14

This is so lovely, Ann. I was tempted to try a mermaid poem after Bernadette gave us the image, but I feel my attempts are rubbish in comparison, lol. Love, Lynn xxx

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Alain English

Sat 28th Aug 2010 16:30

Loved it - you really capture the beauty of mermaids - well rendered poem!

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 28th Aug 2010 15:04

Ayup Jim lad! I just added an audioo for yuoo! (With a bit on the end - of her tail!) Swish swish!! xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 28th Aug 2010 14:01

Just a daft ancient piece (much like myself!) xxxx

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