field boundaries
a yoghurt pot crushed in the muddy verge
black plastic rumpled by the field gate
a buzzard flaps, hunting, shaggy winged.
dull trees oppress.
and at the fields’ edges as I walk
I sense the shades of other quiet lives
there beneath the ashes and the oak
many dim figures soften into green.
interminable windings, little hills -
the road drones on to Sheepwash village where
the shop is closed - it’s Wednesday
so no soap.
many women must have walked this path
between the manor house and little church
it seems to me a sad and lonely route
betrothal, birth, baptism, a gentle death.
the angels’ wings are golden in the church
and in the graveyard I find a dead vole.
I lay him in the ivy secretly behind
somebody else’s graven stone.
<Deleted User> (7790)
Sat 4th Sep 2010 10:37
I know this walk -- how brilliant to read such a thrilling, beautifully controlled evocation: did they tell you about the ghost of the young woman who appears inside the manor and also by the mill pond? Your astute visual sense and rich, apposite vocabulary work in tandem to create a sense of mystery. Brilliant!