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9/11

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Oh yes! I remember that day.

You’d gone back to London

the old taxi chugging.

I waved goodbye

as you rounded the lane’s bend.

 

There’d been flies in the conservatory for days

and you never did approve of spray.

I went to the hardware shop to buy a can.

The man behind the counter said

“Have you seen what’s happening in America?”

 

I walked home and guiltily

pressed the button down,

closing the conservatory doors.

Went into the living room and

turned on the TV.

 

Saw the scene of smoke and panic

chalky figures stumbling

Pompei on 7th Avenue.

debris like snow new-fallen

and bodies bursting on the sidewalk.

 

I ventured back to our conservatory

where all the flies were lying on their backs.

Yes I remember 9/11.

The day I slaughtered all the flies.

 

 

 photo shows one of the preserved bodies from Pompei

◄ dance around the kitchen cos it's . . . Thursday?

manhug ►

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Sun 12th Sep 2010 21:41

Marvellous, eloquent poem.
Can you belive that my friend and I were eyeing up the girls on a beach in Spain & glimpsed the front page of the Mirror that a guy nearby was reading - we just couldn't believe it - and it's still so shocking - unbelievable.

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Dave Carr

Sun 12th Sep 2010 10:04

I like this Ann.
Good analogy.
And I remember that day well. I was at home with my arm in a sling.
Dave

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Greg Freeman

Sat 11th Sep 2010 17:09

Agree with previous comments completely. This is a very fine poem, Ann

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winston plowes

Sat 11th Sep 2010 16:02

Hi Ann. Thought the comparison here was a fantastic and powerful device. Great poem. I was in the bakers buying pies.

<Deleted User> (7790)

Sat 11th Sep 2010 13:51

LOve this: incredibly powerful (and very visual) twinning in every sense -- the micro and the macro. Haunting. Also, ever so glad you don't kill flies anymore....

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 11th Sep 2010 07:21

I don't kill things any more! This was probably the only time I have ever used fly spray, and that and the other events of that day have always been fused in my memory. I hope no one will see it as being disrespectful to all the poor souls who perished on that day.

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