Away From Comfort
Away From Comfort
Yellowing bricks in
My eye line
As I sit here.
Waiting.
It's cold
I'm waiting for home
A familiar smell
A sound that I know
But sitting here
In silence
As a train rushes by
I'm thinking of you
I'm longing for you
As every sound
Makes my ears prick up
I'm wishing it was
The sound of your voice
As every second
Ticks by
I wish you were here.
Graham Sherwood
Wed 15th Sep 2010 22:44
Explain your allusions. what is the familiar smell? A familiar sound, how cold is it? brittle, smarting, deathly etc. Bring it to life for us.