Desire or Truth?
Desire Or Truth
Is this just desire
Or the truth?
The way I can't seem
To stay away
Does it mean I love you
When your skin feels
Electric under my touch?
Does it mean I adore you
When you look at me that way
And my whole body melts to the ground?
The way you make me tingle
When you say those things
Is this just desire
Or truth?
Is it just desire
When I can't control myself
Around you anymore?
Or the truth
When you whisper
Those words to me?
Is it just desire
When I miss you so much
It hurts
Now you've disappeared?
Forever...
Andy N
Thu 16th Sep 2010 08:16
like the repeating of desire and truth in this piece... i am not sure you need forever at the end of the piece.. perhaps forever being removed would leave it on more of a mystery with disappeaed?