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Desire or Truth?

Desire Or Truth

  

Is this just desire

Or the truth?

The way I can't seem

To stay away

 

Does it mean I love you

When your skin feels

Electric under my touch?

 

Does it mean I adore you

When you look at me that way

And my whole body melts to the ground?

 

The way you make me tingle

When you say those things

Is this just desire

Or truth?

 

Is it just desire

When I can't control myself

Around you anymore?

 

Or the truth

When you whisper

Those words to me?

 

Is it just desire

When I miss you so much

It hurts

Now you've disappeared?

Forever...

◄ Away From Comfort

Take me home ►

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Andy N

Thu 16th Sep 2010 08:16

like the repeating of desire and truth in this piece... i am not sure you need forever at the end of the piece.. perhaps forever being removed would leave it on more of a mystery with disappeaed?

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David Mac

Thu 16th Sep 2010 04:31

Yeah, i like this. Good question: desire or truth?

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