Take me home
Take me home
This city
Is my concrete playground
But is the epitome of my boredom
And insecurity.
These lousy streets
With no sense of energy
Are the streets I walk
With no enthusiasm.
But throw me up.
Drop me.
Catch me before I hit the ground.
Make me feel alive.
Take me to the place
Where my heart is
Where it's so quiet you can hear
Everything!
Where the bird song seems so loud
Where the heather's scent's so sweet
Where the views are a sight for sore eyes
That's where I long to be
No need to watch over your shoulder
The only gun shots are from hunters
Shooting game.
Safe.
They say home is where the heart is
But my home isn't here
So take my to that place of freedom
Let the wind be in my hair.
Andy N
Thu 16th Sep 2010 08:15
i like the ending here, lucy in particular.. i like the piece, but there are a few lil edits i would consider (go through it with you next time i see you) x