ADIEU
The autumn is crying,
cold rains denying,
North wind burns my face,
colorful leaves are flying,
as they are in a race.
I have parted with you
telling quiet adieu,
and it seems for good.
Not having heard I love you,
I quite well everything understood.
There was time I believed
when sweet words I received,
I just wanted to be loved,
but you simply deceived,
she has become your beloved.
You’ll be quite well forgotten
as your love was so rotten.
When my wounds are healed
I will start a new life,
in a new house, on my own field.
Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)
Ann Foxglove
Mon 20th Sep 2010 07:05
It is good to get comments but it can be hard when people like different bits. One poem I did a while ago someone said "leave out the third verse!" then someone else said "the third verse is the best one". But we're all different aren't we? One day someone on here will write the perfect poem and EVERYBODY will LOVE ALL of it! xx