Some
Some women like to blame their men
and shame their men,
but above all,
tame their men.
Then they lame their men
so they cannot run,
have fun, an hour in the sun,
be young.
Some men hit their women,
treat them like a bit of shit,
smack the spirit
out of them,
bravely punch their tit
or stomach pit.
Terrorise the cheerful,
keep them fearful, tearful.
Only some,
but some is some
too many.
Andy N
Fri 24th Sep 2010 08:17
i've got a friend who the second stanza applies to.. sad but true, but i am sure one of our female poets could write about this from the other angle..
good stuff thou, dave.