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Some

Some women like to blame their men

and shame their men,

but above all,

tame their men.

Then they lame their men

so they cannot run,

have fun, an hour in the sun,

be young.

 

Some men hit their women,

treat them like a bit of shit,

smack the spirit

out of them,

bravely punch their tit

or stomach pit.

Terrorise the cheerful,

keep them fearful, tearful.

 

Only some,

but some is some

too many.

◄ Holiday (or – stop moaning ya daft bugger and get on wi' it)

Biting the Bullet Final Reminder ►

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Andy N

Fri 24th Sep 2010 08:17

i've got a friend who the second stanza applies to.. sad but true, but i am sure one of our female poets could write about this from the other angle..

good stuff thou, dave.

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