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Do Another Day

Night. Strange blue coming in,

my wild head eating up thoughts,

the clock’s noose around my neck.

 

And there’s a large number of sheep in this tomb,

about 2 per second,

for hours now.

 

There’s a thick panic when I discover birdsong:

it’s early it’s late,

it’s morning it’s night.

 

Perhaps a drink will soften the blow

as the quick hours fall

away into the dawn.

 

Get up and get to work, sad life,

know the poet’s

the lowest paid creature in humanity.

 

But still, as an alligator caked in cool mud,

eyes flicker

at the thought of the world.

 

With an alarming sound I get up,

into the universe.

I drift into the sun,

 

where I harden,

ripen,

and burn.

◄ Morning Horny

I thought of you today ►

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Lynn Dye

Tue 28th Sep 2010 22:06

I can definitely associate with your poem, David - I've had a few nights like that on and off! Good poem.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 26th Sep 2010 09:09

I'm not a critic, I can't say anything clever about this poem, but I think it's very good, that panic when you hear birdsong and realise that you've been awake all night! Love the last verse especially.

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