Don’t touch my heart!
It is broken.
There is no love in it.
I have closed it.
No one cares to see it bleeding,
no one knows its needing.
Love bullet crashed it in pieces,
but I will never fall on my knees.
My heart is not feigning,
the scars are still paining,
but I will never cry,
I will never stand a lie.
There is no love in my heart,
but there is a hope for a new start.
Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)
29/9 2010
Thank you, dear Lynn.
I like this poem, Larisa. And thank you for your kind comments on "Us and Them". Warmest wishes, Lynn xx
Thank you, dear Stefan for the suggestion. It sounds really better.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 29th Sep 2010 20:35
Good Evening Larisa-nice,neat optimistic poem('new start')remember you asked me to help you if needed-som is it ok to suggest'no one-CARES-to see it bleeding? don,t worry if you prefer your line-its still a really nice poem-Thank you-Stef-xx
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<Deleted User> (7789)
Wed 29th Sep 2010 23:01
Hi Larisa! I like the honesty and the hope despite the disappointment expressed. The heart is of course really our private feelings and sometimes we show them and sometimes we don't - but we can still write about them and this is touchingly done here! x