vortexing
Rock’s in profile,
forehead, nose and chin.
Sea’s a mountain,
a cascading avalanche,
white and foamy as milk
boiling in the pan.
Figures on the hill
are warriors.
A kestrel hovers as if
hanging on a string
and boulders lie
calm as elephants
upon the sand.
Oily grey gull feathers
tell a drab story
of October gales,
fragments of crab shell smashed
delicate as dinner plates.
Foam looks dirty in the churning sea
like snow, long fallen.
Children in anoraks and boots,
screams echo, cliff to cliff,
jet black jackdaws saphire eyed
swing, vortexing
above the wave’s crescendo.
Everything waits,
catching it's breath,
for winter.
Andy N
Sun 10th Oct 2010 17:24
Hi Ann - no problems personally with just writing poems that are descriptive than meanings.. A good poem that is descriptive to me does have a meaning, be it different of course.
Either way, I enjoyed this.. I like the fact it is almost a snapshot or a photograph.. top stuff! x