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buy a pencil
from my sister - her
English A-level - heard
Shelley
never used ink
Wikipedia Shelley - why
was he so good?
steer clear of Shelley
far
too hard
ask sister who's
not that
difficult
instead
buy books by Bukowski
two - seek advice of
Waterstones staff
read dad's Racing Post
a sip of whiskey
(think about having)
- don't smile
buy
another pencil
Hey Richard, seems you had a good apprenticeship, any more like that?
Dave
<Deleted User> (5984)
Wed 11th Jun 2008 20:19
Richard
this is such a clever poem and I love the way the disjointed format suits the awkwardness of young love. I think the repetition of first and last line is very effective
Mel
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<Deleted User> (4281)
Wed 11th Jun 2008 04:15
HI, Richard
The poem shows your innocent teenage love toward someone special...A little mystery, thoughts hidden there. Sounds like a Challenge write.
Thank you,
Zuzanna
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<Deleted User> (4988)
Thu 12th Jun 2008 22:29
Hi,
Cheers for the comments!
Richard.