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Astray

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Lead me astray 
Where the land meets the sea

I’ll follow your trail
To an unknown place

Unrehearsed
Like a dream

As the moments are lost 
Just take me away

And I’ll let me be gone 
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Francine

Wed 15th Apr 2009 00:28

Beautiful poem and beautiful beach...
I can totally identify with this...

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Wed 11th Jun 2008 04:11

Alison
The poem shows your desire to escape from where you are. Dreamy style of a write.

Nice short poem.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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