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The Persistent Memoir

The rope felt the bark many times,

roughed it’s muscles, the hair fracturing in ice,

split the year in half and dangled -

 

pillars without a point running through paper,

nothing at once, one recurring halo.

 

Elaborate glass; stretch it out over the heat -

a body floating, a body standing,

opening up bright eyes, a thirst, a cough

under the shifting of a moustache, ten to two.

 

Subvertabrae.

 

And then some.

◄ The Subtitles

And the trees fought back ►

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Elaine Booth

Mon 8th Nov 2010 21:44

Liked the title as a play on "The Persistence of Memory". I especially enjoyed the first verse. This seems to have a life of it's own,possibly seperate from the rest, but then the key to the whole piece is perhaps "fracturing.." since this is the surrealist experience?

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winston plowes

Wed 3rd Nov 2010 16:01

An yes. Was it me that set you off with my dali drivel? This is much better and I am working on a new one also, X

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Wed 3rd Nov 2010 14:03

been thinking about Dali

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 3rd Nov 2010 13:38

Maybe just a teeny hint of intent?

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