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Castaway


It was wrong of me
to throw my problems onto you.
To tar you with my brush
to expect you to care
to need you to be there.

What are we but a by-product?
The detritus of the life we lead.
And who am I to lay this on you?
To demand more of you
To want a rock to cling to.

And so I let you go;
Cast myself off from your rock
Let the burgeoning waves
carry me far from you
so you will never need to know

◄ The Afflicted

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Elaine Booth

Mon 15th Nov 2010 14:39

Very gentle, thoughtful poem. Sad but tender.

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Steven Kenny

Tue 9th Nov 2010 11:09

Thanks for your comment Laura, you're right about the typo :-) Fixed it!

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Laura Taylor

Tue 9th Nov 2010 10:39

Little typo maybe? 2nd line, 2nd verse - should that be detritus?

Despairing, this. Almost bleeding.

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