Fields of War
They stand, sentries at the cenotaph
Indestructible memories,
dulled by opiums flowers
scattered in the winds of war.
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Comments
really like this, janet.... says a lot in a few words.. top one xx
Short poems in vogue these days. Enjoyed this. I wondered about deadened rather than dulled.
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Sat 13th Nov 2010 14:11
Thank you both for commenting.
Ray - I had wondered about another word other than dulled but i don't feel deadened is quite right either. I'll have a mooch in the Roget's.