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Lazy Sun

Today is half gone and the sun has not come.
Winter days the sun is lazy.
Morning is past, grey to the last.
The old sun cries in his pillows.

They say the sun is a fellow to shun.
In the summer he turns you crazy,
But I sympathise with the sore, wet eyes
Of the sun in the cloud’s soft billows.
Old sun, sad sun.
Sleep sun, die sun.
The sun is grey all the wet dim day.
Do you really sit up there and cry, sun?

◄ I cross a moor where stars are white.

Amber ►

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Nov 2010 17:50

I really love the first four lines. The beginning of the next verse loses momentum for me, but the end comes back strong. Good one!

<Deleted User> (7164)

Mon 15th Nov 2010 11:52

It always makes me laugh when people say the sun is a male energy. I like to think of her as a Goddess :-)
Nice poem Freda.x

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