Space - Between the Lines
Silence
Perimeters , none
Accumulating energy
Clouds , gone
Empathy in space
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Comments
<Deleted User> (7164)
Thu 18th Nov 2010 00:54
Thanks for comments everyone :-)
Laura - if I added a sixth line it would have to begin with either the letter S or the letter D to keep within the theme. Can you see why now? :-)
Very atmospheric.
you are defo on a good role, Janet here.. one of my favourites so far on this space theme... x
Ooo, very short and compact. Empathy? I'm going a bit mad on structure lately...I would have liked to have seen another one word line at the end there.
Just my symmetrical obsession rearing its ugly head again ;)
<Deleted User> (8657)
Tue 16th Nov 2010 21:45
Perfect.
Wot! No final frontier? Good one Janet! Concise. xx
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Laura Taylor
Thu 18th Nov 2010 10:02
Yes, I see why, and I am officially a complete berk, as I totally missed it first time around! DESPITE having done the same bloody thing with my own pome! Jesus I can be reet thick sometimes :D