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Cataract

I see you, pedestrian, matte, impassive sky,
not unlike a smear on a windscreen – wings erased,
and nonplussed - spread in your presence, dull.
Where is the stroke of Korat fur, the thunder blushing finger?
I am so wanting today.
 
I left my daughter by the sea, growing auburn,
do you know her? And my father’s dandelion hair;
away, away, away.
I move without pith, maps tangling around my ankles,
all Mome rath, and my husband’s vows, moth eaten.
 
I am stopped.
 
I need not see to see you, I tell myself every day.

◄ And the trees fought back

Mr Camera ►

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:37

thankyou steve!

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garside

Fri 19th Nov 2010 09:39

really enjoyed reading this - subtle rhyme and archaic words are well used

the thunder blushing finger - excellent

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