Green Man
GREEN MAN Last month's poem of the month writer, Derek Adams, has chosen this month's poem. He says,"It does what I think a poem should do, it tells a big story with few words, it is concise and precise." Find out more about this poem by visiting Jane Holland's blog at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/janeholland She turns in sleep, sensing him in the dream-time. Invisible hands press and lift her, knowing the word that cleans her like water. That face on the garden wall, those hands in her bed: stern, laughing, invincible. They told her it could be dangerous, loving a god. But she wouldn't listen. Now she has ivy in her hair, seed on her thighs. They move wild as foxes, inevitable as earth. (First published in 'Under the Hill')
Julian (Admin)
Sun 17th Jun 2007 15:19
It is a sensual piece, isn't it? Nature red-raw in bed and garden?
Not a superfluous word in it, all add to the whole. It is quite tactile, hard almost in places.
And the directness of this phrase: The word that cleans her like water. Superb.
Thank you.