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Soul

Last month's poem of the month writer, Cath Nichols, has chosen this month's poem. Cath says,"Catherine Smith’s poem starts in a recognizable place (the religious door-to-door salesman) but then morphs off elsewhere. It encourages empathy but also surprises. I like that the religious type is not a Jehovah’s Witness, he’s ‘Presbyterian’, and that the woman trapped on her doorstep visualizes her soul as a tatty mongrel dog that she’s happy to lose. This is so distinctly ‘other’ than my own response to dogs (or dogs as metaphors) that I am compelled to experience the poem on its own terms. " Find out more about Catherine and her work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/catherinesmith Soul The Presbyterian on my doorstep tells me my lack of religious conviction means I'm an unfit mother to my innocent children, my soul is currently in the possession of Lucifer. I decide my soul is a small brown dog (of interest only to me and Lucifer), an ugly mongrel (part terrier), with a penchant for wine gums and shagging strangers' ankles, and it grew savage and grizzled - incontinent and snappy, one ear frilled by fighting, a rheumy left eye. A liability, its breath stinking of old meat. So I tell the Presbyterian Lucifer's welcome to it.

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carol falaki

Mon 25th Feb 2008 20:30

great! thinking outside the box is what i like about this poem

Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 14th Feb 2008 00:52

I absolutely agree with Louise (above)!
Good stuff: this poem's like a good short film script - succinct with plotpoints 1, 2, 3 and a powerful punchline.

<Deleted User> (4244)

Wed 13th Feb 2008 21:19

sorry for typographical error.the word 'soul' is what i wanted not 'solu'.read on hey!

<Deleted User> (4244)

Wed 13th Feb 2008 21:16

too many solu seekers in the world today.talking of heaven and hell with so much conviction that one would be forgiven for thinking that they have been there already.the poem's universality is striking!i live and work in zimbabwe.am a zimbabwean who has been harangued also by these holier than thou people.this poem reminds me of this woman who tried to convert my dad to her christianity when he was on his death bed and could hardly comprehend the warped questioning that he was subjected to.spare me!

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Julian (Admin)

Sat 9th Feb 2008 15:32

Me too! This is what, for me, poetry is about: capturing the essence of an idea in a few words. Here it is done with such humour, too. I love the last (punch) line.

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Louise Fazackerley

Wed 6th Feb 2008 17:43

what a great great choice! i don't want to be a gusher but this reminded it me why i like poetry and made me think i want to write something good like this. nice one, catherine smith :-)

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