Kiss, promise, tell
A first kiss promise,
tangibly felt through fearful lips.
Smiling eyes offer more,
more than I could pledge.
Clutching at sunshine,
filtered through a darkened haze.
Through your gaze, expectancy
In your spoken words, urgency.
Writing down lines, where tears soak paper.
Pulling apart seams, a telling intent,
packed into a case, a deliberate step.
And you know how you layer despair.
Through letterboxes invites are received,
to view a concocted fictional shame.
Now with resolute lips and steadfast hands
I reclaim myself from your lost property.
John Aikman
Tue 7th Dec 2010 13:30
What a fabulous last line! It draws the whole thing together and manages to be poignant, wry, funny and heartbreaking all at once.
Goodstuff.
:-)
Jx