Electricity
Last month's poem of the month writer, Carol Thistlethwaite, has chosen this month's poem. Carol says, "I enjoy the linked flow of ideas and images. They don’t impose on readers but invite them to create their own ‘story’ or whatever."
Find out more about Pam and her work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/pamthompson
Electricity
I remember the house,
remember its breath,
its surfaces bleached,
turning lighter by day
yet scarred by a network
of knives, by your nails,
pale, which now scrape
at frost, score notches
on the windows of your car,
clutch at the static
which bristles between us like fur.
Remember how traffic-lights
dimmed then went out,
how your body was so brave,
there, inside its walk,
the long walk where slugs
had been, the slow weave
over intersections of weeds,
back to the house, to the shell
of your body,
to the shell of its shadow,
where our material things buzz
and where, if the noise
only dies, we are about
to re-discover electricity.
Pam Thompson
Mon 1st Sep 2008 22:04
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate your comments here...am a little late on catching up with my own poem! Pamx