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Snowflake

A single snowflake
Lands softly on me cheek.
And one on the back of my hand.

I watch as it slowly
Melts into beads
Of crystal.
Gradually merging into one.

The water droplet
Runs down my hand.
Lingers at the tip
Of my finger.

I let it dance there
Just for a moment
While the other
Rolls down my cheek.

Or just another tear
Remembering the brilliance
Of the once
Powerful you.

◄ Rise and Fall

Sh*t Christmas ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6315)

Fri 10th Dec 2010 22:06

I so enjoy moment writes and this moment of yours is well captured..nice work indeed.

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Andy N

Fri 10th Dec 2010 14:05

i'll go through this with you next time over some of the line endings, but content wise i think is lovely.. nice one xx

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