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Let's look through ... the suburban window

 

Blurred vision refocused

angelic harps silenced

by rattling vans on uneven tarmac

hurtling buses between stops

chattering birds with their young studs

red-faced dears, grandmotherhood

grazing in the corner shop, not much left

one-armed man, newspaper under stump

ex-dog-walker without his dog

large girl never smiles, always walks by

leather jacket bloke, so does he

all have issues, common ground

 

Iron age man found on the common

barbarism began close to home

in the peat, in the loam

twittering birds, shitting dogs

old couples chatting time away

sitting on obituary benches

as kids laugh at the clucking ducks

 

Clenched fists, fucking noisy kids

pissing in the street, and me off

racists, must be from other places

some money round here, you know

ex-Posh and Becks, Alex and Kerry

and others who could actually write

their own autobiographies

lawyers, accountants

even me

now how did I get here

oh yes, by taxi

◄ Father's Day

Au revoir, mes amis ►

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 19th Jun 2008 09:31

Great poem Ant, enjoyed that, amusing take on a few places I'm sure we all know, cheers ps could you not find a bigger picture? Jeff

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 21:55

Just looked at the pic again. I see big brother's on the street again, and what's that in the trees, a kyte or another camera?

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 17:21

At first glance, the pic looks like two one way streets going up the same avenue, then a car in the middle went and spoiled the vision.
It all sounds a bit cynical to me or is it just meant to be dry humour? Janet.x

<Deleted User> (4744)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 17:12

You can aford a taxi! ... you posh git! ...lol

Nice one... enjoyed that.

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