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The Sun and The Moon.

You are just the sun.

Here, gone, left, right

And I merely the moon.

Passers by of the same sky

Over each other's horizons,

Cancel one another out.

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Andy N

Fri 31st Dec 2010 08:18

lovely (if that is the right word), Georgina. I particularly the use of the sun 'here, gone, left, right'.. Perhaps the next line with the Moon should have 'And I am merely the Moon' in it... but enjoyed it either way xx

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 30th Dec 2010 13:19

Love it - you're a Star :)

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