Freedomless Train
Were on that train again,
stained windows and
yesterdays kiss
been here before
windowless soul and
tomorrows kiss
conversing about lust,
destiny and trust
The time will pass again
when you must decide
between freedom and
suicide
Are you sure, that you
would like to stay?
Paint me a picture
chase this train away
Well darkness comes and
it goes away
time to choose between
death and pride
You come to play and
I run and hide
Pluckin on my heart strings like
a guitar
playin melodies I can't relate
time to choose between power
and fate
Were on that train again
stained kisses and a
windowless train
sat in this carriage, beside fate
waiting for Control and songs I
can relate
<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 25th Jun 2008 12:50
Hi Richard, it feels to me as if the poem is about relationships. The kind which, no matter how we try, we know it can't work for any great length of time before we get to the same point again.
A bit like a vicious circle. Very difficult to deal with depending on circumstances, such as children and the responsibilities which come with that. Don't know if i'm right or not but that's what it feels like to me.
Enjoyed the read. Thanks, Janet.x