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Torn

 

 

Bastardized tribulations of a betrayed soul

A carnal thirst for uncorrupted flesh

Soulful and forlorn the desires effervesce

Enthralled by her quarry she lusts tearfully

 

Deformed ideals limp across an entombed apperception

Enlisted with evil yet loyalties remain torn

Serendipitous in origins preordained in future

In frenzied response on humans riposte

Radiant in beauty yet deadly rapier in task

Emaciated are emotions shrouded in mystery

She sleeps, but in daylight aside from humanity

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alan barlow

Thu 13th Jan 2011 19:46

a vampress cynthia but not a happy one ;-)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 13th Jan 2011 19:38

A foraging animal? The 'cat' complex? The much-maligned 'serpent'? Metamorphosis of Evil in general? Any chance of hearing the author's intent?

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alan barlow

Thu 13th Jan 2011 16:32

thanks for the comment in what sense would you say out of interest please ? choice of diction per chance ? apocalyptic ?
cheers again al

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