Remember Me
(Only Connect)
Remember Me – 1
Take your curls,
your sweet birds, the way you look in him;
nights threaded with ginger ale,
chilli wits,
blue-eyes spinning.
The laughter catches my kitchen’s latch,
and clumsy your ribbons are
in my grey stained hands.
To steady, I will take
what youth sparks on my tongue,
as old stories dribble down,
over-told, and pull the needle through
to mend .
Remember Me – 2
"You’ll be a boy again.”
We let our feet dangle -
the ground underneath us; a dusty biscuit,
blurred.
He lies on one side,
the chewed up horizon,
a map between his.
His eyes go back, flickering
from the smatters of radio,
and
the empty shell we hear,
bouncing underneath the tyre.
We are bitter with cigarettes.
Remember Me – 3
I taste the far out sea.
Sprung, my curtains chase
all of you -
dipping sea combers, father’s picnic cricket,
a red ball in the air
and a shout.
My wood is bleached and stripped,
your patter,
sand in the grooves.
Remember Me – 4
I keep my time, precise,
with tea served.
I know each corridor,
each way to attend.
I know your suit - pressed -
your paper,
and who you’d rather not speak to.
I know the china, I know the Port,
know your books,
your discourse.
I walk through your halls,
knowing when to hide my step.
Remember Me – 5
I walk with you –
the wind is wide,
the palette around here;
everything.
Smile,
and frown and you not there,
but a flicker across my brow,
means we are friends again.
What coloured air! What things we say, suspended.
Ray Miller
Wed 2nd Feb 2011 13:49
Terrific. I have to try and understand who the narrator is speaking to - it sounds like a parent in an old people's home - and then I can pull the needle through. I liked no.4 best. And these:
The laughter catches my kitchen’s latch,
the wind is wide,