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Antelope canyon

copper sun lights the
age-worn curves,
softening the harsh edges
with hazy shadow.
the gentle rise and fall of time
throws images of women,
provocotive and ethereal.
drawn to exquisiteness,
i return time and again.
Forever enchanted.

◄ i disappear

Dreamer ►

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Steven Kenny

Fri 4th Feb 2011 12:48

I think this one turned out well Kath! I know you mentioned writing about the canyon and your poem captures the images you showed me really well! :-)

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Francine

Fri 4th Feb 2011 00:14

I really like this, Kath...
I find it ambiguous yet profound.

p.s. Love your new profile photo!

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kath hewitt

Thu 3rd Feb 2011 23:48

if i'm honest i don't really think much of this but hey ho, in for a penny and all that :-)

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