Full stop shockle.
Sandfoot sunrise
Horizon.
Shallow curls of water
Ankle brimming.
Shin sprinkled.
Rocks at the bottom
Flat animated.
Colour specks reflected
Neat warmth to form
Cotton skin shimmer.
Yawn sprawling.
Luxurized.
The possibility of ham
And wine.
A granding.
Bored on purpose.
Certain comfort.
This scene is
Wrapped in plastic ink
Thought only.
You drop words like jewels to evoke emotions, images, thought (duh! like your title says); but, anyway, I find indolence and insolence seeping up through your words to mock the reader, and yet I feel the desire to grab the reader into intense intimacy, an engulfing togetherness. Mate, I'm going to take a break from your work; I begin to sound like an idiot.
lot of stuff to like here, kealan even though i don't get the meaning (Probably too early).
Particularly like the 1st stanza..
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melanie coady
Wed 9th Mar 2011 07:58
jesus i lived it i read it over and over hnstly..gonna read it again!