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The rain meditates

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The gongs and drums

of the mind are in a rhythm,

the moon is light in the blossom,

raindrops descend

like pearls,

sleek clouds ride the wind

into forever,

wet trees flit and fro

like noble beings

to patterened pitter,

the river and me

sit in the blue brush

of the road of sky for flight

for only sacred birds,

the rain falls

lightly 

into

a fine mist,

I see your drunk eyes

lost in the city

I idly sing a song of beauty,

the rain is

my monastery

in the floating of

thoughts,

a glow behind

the screen of dreams

the rain shares

its

journey

from the

farthest

sky. 

◄ Fun poem

Writers workshop poem 1 ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Fri 11th Jul 2008 19:07

Hello, Neil Francis

The poem is lovely and tuned well with the Nature which I adore. Great job!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:01

This poem is very imaginative.
I did read it the other day but it didn't make much sense to me.
When i looked again today, i found i was scrolling through it a section at a time.
Doing that helped the punctuation which is missing throughout.
It's quite light 'n' very nice i think.
Thankyou, Janet.x

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