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Pathetic

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If i tell you things, will you hurt me?

To be vulnerable at this age is pathetic probably,

If i am honest and true, will you hurt me?

To be fucked up at this age is pathetic probably,

If i change my sinful promiscuous ways for you, will you hurt me?

To be worried by all this at this stage is pathetic probably,

Now you know the other person lurking within me,

Will you hurt me?

Will you walk away?

Proabably!

hurt

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Fkx

Thu 12th May 2011 13:26

Will you? :-)

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melanie coady

Thu 12th May 2011 09:43

john thank u so much for reading my stuff...xxx

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:42

thanks again kealan...ye jules the mood has everything to do wit th style of th poem i write..sometimes i get really dark its scary x

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kealan coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:36

really enjoyed this one aswell, excellent mood conveyed here.

<Deleted User> (8730)

Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:01

I have writtem poems like this lately

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