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One Day

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One day i will thread barefoot across a poppy field,

Sun kissed and warm, truly from the inside out,

And i will feel truly loved, probably not un conditionally (that never happens!)

 

One day i will fall love soaked into your arms, and truly surrender my soul to you,

But is that fair?!

love

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<Deleted User> (8951)

Mon 14th Mar 2011 21:18

This is well nice Melanie lovein it..

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:35

thanks lads xxx

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kealan coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:33

this is another great piece mel, realy enjoyed it

<Deleted User> (8730)

Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:00

Good

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 09:22

ah blast i didn't put the brackets around it at 1st then someone told me it would be stronger with them lol..thanks hun x

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Andy N

Wed 9th Mar 2011 08:12

I like this Melanie - however not sure if you need the brackets (that never happens!) as i think it's probably stronger without it.. enjoyed it however x

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