I will open my door to you and we will do business,
I will open my arms to you and it will be cosy,
I will open my legs to you and it will be beautiful,
I will open my mind to you and it will be a prism of my life,
I will open my heart to you and you will be in heavan.
thank u for yer engcouragment lads xxx
well written mel, good stuff
<Deleted User> (8730)
Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:00
That is a fantastic poem.
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Gareth Writer-Davies
Mon 14th Mar 2011 20:51
The first three lines are great, the last two lines are good. The fact that the title is in the past tense and the poem is in the future is v clever!