How We Met

Sunday 13th March 2011 12:09 pm (first posted Tuesday 8th March 2011 3:54 pm)

I will open my door to you and we will do business,

I will open my arms to you and it will be cosy,

I will open my legs to you and it will be beautiful,

I will open my mind to you and it will be a prism of my life,

I will open my heart to you and you will be in heavan.

Comments

Mon 14th Mar 2011 20:51

The first three lines are great, the last two lines are good. The fact that the title is in the past tense and the poem is in the future is v clever!

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:36

thank u for yer engcouragment lads xxx

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:32

well written mel, good stuff

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Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:00

That is a fantastic poem.

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