What's next?
Whats next?
So what's next?
That's the question
It's on all our minds
And leads to frustration
When I was young,
I didn't imagine
All the stress I had
And that grown up things would happen
But do I want to be a kid again?
The answer is no
To some I may be too young to have memoirs
But it's alright, I have plenty more to show
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 13th Mar 2011 17:47
Stefan has made a very good comment. There is an honesty about your lines that does attract people. Sometimes I think the ideas are a bit mixed up, and could be easily sorted, for more clarity. Do you carefully read your own finished work with a fresh eye, to check out how others will see it? One misused word can knock out your intended meaning. It happens to us all.